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Resume / CV tips: examples of good and bad styling


Good example:

May 1995 - Jun 1997
Researcher for Star TV, Hong Kong
  1. Providing research for commentators
  2. Writing and producing news segments, features
Jun 1994 - Feb 1995
Sub-editor for Commercial Radio, Hong Kong
  1. Writing and sub-editing news for radio broadcasts
Jan 1994 - Apr 1994
Company Manager for Hong Kong Arts Festival, Hong Kong
  1. Supervising production of a large-scale opera staged at the Hong Kong Cultural Centre
  2. Point of contact between the contracted company and the festival office
Sep 1991 - Dec 1993
Stage Manager for Pimlico Opera, London and around UK
  1. Stage managing musicals in Wormwood Scrubs and Wandsworth Prison, and operas in a tour of stately homes around the UK
  2. Overseeing all aspects of production

Bad example:

May 1995 - Jun 1997
Researcher for Star TV, Hong Kong
  1. Providing research for commentators.
  2. Writing and producing news segments, features
Jun 1994 - Feb 1995
Writing and sub-editing news for radio broadcasts
  1. Sub-editor for Commercial Radio, HK.
Jan 1994 - Apr 1994
HKAF, Hong Kong
  1. Supervising production of a large-scale opera staged at the Hong Kong Cultural Centre
  2. Point of contact between the contracted company and the festival office.

September 1991-93
Pimlico Opera’s Stage Manager, UK
Stage managing musicals in Wormwood Scrubs and Wandsworth Prison, and operas in a tour of stately homes around the UK. Overseeing all aspects of production


What is wrong with the bad example?

  1. Inconsistent date format.
  2. Inconsistent lay-out of job title and duties.
  3. Inconsistent punctuation.
  4. Inconsistent use of bullets.
  5. Inconsistent spacing between sections.
  6. Inconsistent use of italics, bolding and underlining.
  7. No at-a-glance readability. This slows down your reader and creates reasons to lose their focus.
  8. It’s messy.
Article published 30/10/06

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